For reading we made a D.L.O about volcanoes this was for reading as we have read about volcanoes recently. We had to choose one volcano in particular and I chose Mt St. Helen's. This was interesting finding out new facts.
Here it is:
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For reading we made a D.L.O about volcanoes this was for reading as we have read about volcanoes recently. We had to choose one volcano in particular and I chose Mt St. Helen's. This was interesting finding out new facts.
Here it is:
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Hi Lucas, I like the way that you wrote about one volcano really in detail. This is really interesting for me to learn about Mt st Helen's. Next time you should put a real picture of the volcano. Keep up this great work!
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