Here are mine:
- Sunny by Papa ya
- No one compares to you by Jack & Jack
- Big plans by Why don't we
- The man by Taylor Swift
- Miss Americana and the heartbreak prince by Taylor Swift
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hey Lucas!
ReplyDeleteI'm Natasha. I'm a year 11 student from Hornby High and I'm going to be giving you some constructive feedback on a few of your Summer Learning Journey blog posts over the next few weeks :) I use to go to South Hornby too!
There's quite a deal of disparity in your music taste I see! That's a great list of songs, I use to listen to a lot of Taylor Swift when I was younger. I like that you've explained the task too, that can be really helpful for unknowing readers who have come across your blog!
Adding images to your posts can be a great way of reaching more people - it makes your posts more eye catching. Just a bit of advice for future posts :) You could even embed a Youtube video. For example, if you were to add a video from Youtube in this post you could add a music video of one or two of the songs on your list!
Do you have a favourite genre, or do you enjoy all sorts of music? Do you have a favourite artist/singer/band?
Great post Lucas, can't wait to see more excellent work from you in the future. Have an awesome night, happy blogging :)